You certainly did a good job mixing the various parts together well. I did feel a bit like there was too much classical; it would have been interesting if you had chopped/modded the classical samples more (maybe near the middle or end). I liked the snare in the drums, but the kick was a bit faint. (Maybe just my speakers on this end, though.)
It seems like a great foundation or beginning. I feel like more samples, and perhaps another lead voice or something, could be added.
