I can see the type of june miller-esque sound you're going for. I personally think the synths could do with having some high frequencies removed, just to remove a bit of hiss. Some of the drum hits could do with being adjusted in terms of volume, some of them stick out more than others. In the parts where you have brief moments of silence, I think reverb tails on the ends of the preceding sounds could help make this sound less abrupt if you get what I mean. Hope this helps!
