An Who Sez? new tune, need feedback please

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by jay walker, Nov 22, 2005.

  1. jay walker

    jay walker 1/2 of Passive/Aggressive

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    A likkle sumpin I started after Mission last thursday - Put in 5 hours on friday, an the results are as follows: http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=679354&t=5368

    Jus at stream at the mo, will sort an mp3 soon as! :thumbsup:

    Cheesy as a Dairylea triangle, but still a nice slice of dancefloor IMO, feedback needed :spliff:
     
  2. sdm

    sdm This is Dog Fort

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    Requires a login :-/
     
  3. jay walker

    jay walker 1/2 of Passive/Aggressive

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    Will upload an mp3 to sendspace or youhostit 2nizzle ;)
     
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    Dj_Fozzybear Greenpiece Records

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    Big Up The man like Jay Walker!!!
    THis is a good idea man, well good concept an the lyrics fit really well with the track. I like the drum edits, they keep it simple, to the point an effective on the dancefloor.
    Needs some more punch in the beat an a couple more bass/synth noises to fill it out but a well good concept.
    Who's the MC?
    :wave:
     
  5. jay walker

    jay walker 1/2 of Passive/Aggressive

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    Tis MC 5-0 vox offa sample cd, wicked mc imo.

    Ill take the advise on board, hold tight for a revised version, cheers fozzy! :beers:
     
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    Dj_Fozzybear Greenpiece Records

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    He is good man, he has got a well good tone, and you can hear his lyrics!!!!
    I am looking forward to the update!!!:bounce:
    BIG UPS!!!!:bounce:
     
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    jay walker 1/2 of Passive/Aggressive

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    sdm This is Dog Fort

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    Nice work Jay, I really like the bline/synth in the intro, the one after the drop doesn't really do it for me (each to his own though!)

    Other than that, I think the tune just needs to 'grime' it up a bit (phatter/bigger drums etc.)

    Nice work man, I'd really like to see that intro bline used more, it's baad (y)

    I thought swingbeats went out last year :teeth:
     
  9. jay walker

    jay walker 1/2 of Passive/Aggressive

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    Cheers Guvnor, Yer the intro bline is what grabs me too, maybe a rework incorporating it is needed.

    As for the swingbeat, they did go out last year, but im old school, seen? :D

     
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  11. Bad Ace

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    havent heard this yet........ill take a listen later on (y)
     
  12. DjEffect

    DjEffect lethaleffect.co.uk

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    I agree with the ppl above, needs a few more elements to fill it out.

    But i like it, bouncy and catchy, a very fun tune :D