An Who Sez? new tune, need feedback please

[jay walker]

A likkle sumpin I started after Mission last thursday - Put in 5 hours on friday, an the results are as follows: http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=679354&t=5368

Jus at stream at the mo, will sort an mp3 soon as! :thumbsup:

Cheesy as a Dairylea triangle, but still a nice slice of dancefloor IMO, feedback needed

 

[sdm]

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[jay walker]

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Will upload an mp3 to sendspace or youhostit 2nizzle

 

[Dj_Fozzybear]

Big Up The man like Jay Walker!!!
THis is a good idea man, well good concept an the lyrics fit really well with the track. I like the drum edits, they keep it simple, to the point an effective on the dancefloor.
Needs some more punch in the beat an a couple more bass/synth noises to fill it out but a well good concept.
Who's the MC?

 

[jay walker]

Big Up The man like Jay Walker!!!
THis is a good idea man, well good concept an the lyrics fit really well with the track. I like the drum edits, they keep it simple, to the point an effective on the dancefloor.
Needs some more punch in the beat an a couple more bass/synth noises to fill it out but a well good concept.
Who's the MC?

Tis MC 5-0 vox offa sample cd, wicked mc imo.

Ill take the advise on board, hold tight for a revised version, cheers fozzy!

 

[Dj_Fozzybear]

Tis MC 5-0 vox offa sample cd, wicked mc imo.

Ill take the advise on board, hold tight for a revised version, cheers fozzy!

He is good man, he has got a well good tone, and you can hear his lyrics!!!!
I am looking forward to the update!!!
BIG UPS!!!!

 

[jay walker]

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http://s36.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3DCTB3HM7YX6Q1221NQPR8XQ5T

'ere we go then cheif, a lil clip for yah

 

[sdm]

http://s36.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=3DCTB3HM7YX6Q1221NQPR8XQ5T

'ere we go then cheif, a lil clip for yah

Nice work Jay, I really like the bline/synth in the intro, the one after the drop doesn't really do it for me (each to his own though!)

Other than that, I think the tune just needs to 'grime' it up a bit (phatter/bigger drums etc.)

Nice work man, I'd really like to see that intro bline used more, it's baad

I thought swingbeats went out last year

 

[jay walker]

Cheers Guvnor, Yer the intro bline is what grabs me too, maybe a rework incorporating it is needed.

As for the swingbeat, they did go out last year, but im old school, seen?

Nice work Jay, I really like the bline/synth in the intro, the one after the drop doesn't really do it for me (each to his own though!)

Other than that, I think the tune just needs to 'grime' it up a bit (phatter/bigger drums etc.)

Nice work man, I'd really like to see that intro bline used more, it's baad

I thought swingbeats went out last year

 

[sdm]

As for the swingbeat, they did go out last year, but im old school, seen?

 

[Bad Ace]

havent heard this yet........ill take a listen later on

 

[DjEffect]

I agree with the ppl above, needs a few more elements to fill it out.

But i like it, bouncy and catchy, a very fun tune