a little dnb ting i been working on

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by emersonsamuels, Jun 13, 2012.

  1. emersonsamuels

    emersonsamuels Member

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    first crack at a dnb tune.
    just looking for feedback, critiscm etc.
     
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    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    I like it. It gets a little repetitive real quick. You could use some 16th bar break downs. Added drums on counts for more of a rolling along feeling. Change up the bass more. And your piano is clipping.
     
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    intro should be 2 times as long, female vocals start in at 2 bars, piano breakdown after 4 bars and combine the pre breakdown into that, needs a power snare and cymbal breaks but i hear what you're trying to do i love it too, at 1:33 it gets dope. but yeah repetitive... if you had a vocalist it would help to structure things out. really good work tho. impressive.

    check out synthogy pianos