a little dnb ting i been working on

[emersonsamuels]

first crack at a dnb tune.
just looking for feedback, critiscm etc.

https://soundcloud.com/nosreme%2Fa-eel

 

[IV4]

I like it. It gets a little repetitive real quick. You could use some 16th bar break downs. Added drums on counts for more of a rolling along feeling. Change up the bass more. And your piano is clipping.

 

[equilibrium]

intro should be 2 times as long, female vocals start in at 2 bars, piano breakdown after 4 bars and combine the pre breakdown into that, needs a power snare and cymbal breaks but i hear what you're trying to do i love it too, at 1:33 it gets dope. but yeah repetitive... if you had a vocalist it would help to structure things out. really good work tho. impressive.

check out synthogy pianos