Why - llSpaMll - Jump up tune

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by llSpaMll, Jul 15, 2009.

  1. llSpaMll

    llSpaMll Member

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    so yeah i called it why and... why i called it that idk i guess for lack of a better lol name i gotta do a few changes, i made it in about 12 hours just straight given er' :p. it'll be on the myspace page but here's the download link too.

    http://www.mediafire.com/?kzjwzqxtjmj
     
  2. subprime

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    First, it's like two different tracks. The trancey intro and the jump up drop. Didn't really work for me. You've done quite a bit of work on the bass synths, perhaps not so much on the drums which sounded a bit neglected and samey. They were a little back in the mix as well.
    If you get the balance right I think it would sound better IMHO
     
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    ill fix n finish it i just made that in about 12 hours so i got loads of time to make change's n stuff but hey for my very first week using reason how's that :p
     
  4. krease

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    drums need definate work, bass is ok but has no impact, i like the bitcrushed "yoi" bass thing tho!