Why - llSpaMll - Jump up tune

[llSpaMll]

so yeah i called it why and... why i called it that idk i guess for lack of a better lol name i gotta do a few changes, i made it in about 12 hours just straight given er' . it'll be on the myspace page but here's the download link too.

http://www.mediafire.com/?kzjwzqxtjmj

 

[subprime]

First, it's like two different tracks. The trancey intro and the jump up drop. Didn't really work for me. You've done quite a bit of work on the bass synths, perhaps not so much on the drums which sounded a bit neglected and samey. They were a little back in the mix as well.
If you get the balance right I think it would sound better IMHO

 

[llSpaMll]

ill fix n finish it i just made that in about 12 hours so i got loads of time to make change's n stuff but hey for my very first week using reason how's that

 

[krease]

drums need definate work, bass is ok but has no impact, i like the bitcrushed "yoi" bass thing tho!