Nice vocal. Drums are plenty punchy. Could do with a bit more shuffle. Nice build up. To a hip hop breakdown?! OK. Good. Possibly lost a bit of momentum/power here. And faded out.
Ok, really hope you can finish this tune. Got heaps of potential. Could be massive.
That hiphop/half beat piece could have been at the start? building to a drop? Just an idea. It did just start to drag in there, and not sure if the build up worked, followed by the slower bit.
Just ideas, Good luck, look forward to the result.