vegaandvaguer
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vega & vaguer - australia's finest new dnb/techno/big beat
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australia's finest hey? not really a dnb tune....
too much guitar, which seems to meander aimlessly quite a bit and the licks are cliched to say the least
levels are all over the place
there's no sub or bassline
The arrangement needs to be tighter, the track doesn't appear to go anywhere really
I'm not exactly sure what mastering will do to improve the track, you should fix the mix and arrangement first before getting it mastered
sorry to be harsh, but it's better to be honest than say, "oh that's a good track" without meaning it
too much guitar, which seems to meander aimlessly quite a bit and the licks are cliched to say the least
levels are all over the place
there's no sub or bassline
The arrangement needs to be tighter, the track doesn't appear to go anywhere really
I'm not exactly sure what mastering will do to improve the track, you should fix the mix and arrangement first before getting it mastered
sorry to be harsh, but it's better to be honest than say, "oh that's a good track" without meaning it
M. Progression
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Yeah, agreed. It's all over the place and I'm not even sure if this track is really DnB. hhmmmm.
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would have to agree here not a dnb tune and needs alot of werk
off beat snare stabs are a bit loud and the whole thing sounds a bit loose
maybe try focusing on one thnig in the tune, get it tight and then move on to other aspects
have to agree wit boot honesty is always the best policy
off beat snare stabs are a bit loud and the whole thing sounds a bit loose
maybe try focusing on one thnig in the tune, get it tight and then move on to other aspects
have to agree wit boot honesty is always the best policy
