vega & vaguer - australia's finest new dnb/techno/big beat

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by vegaandvaguer, Mar 10, 2007.

  1. vegaandvaguer

    vegaandvaguer New Member

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  2. boot

    boot Member

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    australia's finest hey? not really a dnb tune....
    too much guitar, which seems to meander aimlessly quite a bit and the licks are cliched to say the least
    levels are all over the place
    there's no sub or bassline
    The arrangement needs to be tighter, the track doesn't appear to go anywhere really
    I'm not exactly sure what mastering will do to improve the track, you should fix the mix and arrangement first before getting it mastered
    sorry to be harsh, but it's better to be honest than say, "oh that's a good track" without meaning it
     
  3. M. Progression

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    Yeah, agreed. It's all over the place and I'm not even sure if this track is really DnB. hhmmmm.
     
  4. vickvega

    vickvega Mr. Blonde

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    would have to agree here not a dnb tune and needs alot of werk
    off beat snare stabs are a bit loud and the whole thing sounds a bit loose
    maybe try focusing on one thnig in the tune, get it tight and then move on to other aspects
    have to agree wit boot honesty is always the best policy:)