trying some liquid dnb...

[JoJabes]

Hey friends, i worked on this one for some days now. I tried to do something more liquid-like. How does it sound? I seem to have a lot trouble getting the quality of my exportet tracks up to soundcloud. Any tips?
Thanks

https://soundcloud.com/jacubaeschor%2Fseelentier-soul-animal

 

[xiris]

piano EQ in the intro is a bit unnatural, feels like you cut too much off the low end there, consider re-visiting that.
your drop wubs get a bit repetitive, maybe think about going half time/creating a new element to compliment them?
i like the vocal bit, and the second bit of the drop is great too!

Overall i think its a good track man! Good job!

 

[JoJabes]

Thanks Xiris, i will try and rework that piano EQ. I will also try to add some variation on the wubs ^^.

 

[Henry Drum & Bass]

Vocal sounds really cool. I like the percussion too. Maybe try filtering out some of the mids from the bassline to make it a little smoother? Also agree with Xiris on the wubs.

 

[CTJake]

Really good stuff JoJabes, drums are solid, the drop switches up nicely at the halfway point; I can't help but feel the mids on your bassline could use a bit of distortion to help sort of blur the line between bands, then you could look at sending a couple of different mid-high sounds through the same distortion to give it a bit of variation as others have suggested.

 

[JoJabes]

Thanks again, i will work on what you guys said <3

 

[Aetherial]

Piano in the intro could use some work, sounds a bit too "VST" if you know what I mean. The wubs get repetitive, maybe try playing with some new patterns here and there. Other than that, it's a pretty good track. Keep it up