Track Uploaded called One For The Ladies, feedback needed

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by prettyherb, Dec 3, 2010.

  1. prettyherb

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    Eepz, uploaded some new track on soundcloud called one for the ladies, it's electro, not all of u listen to it, but you can leave some feedback :)

    http://soundcloud.com/dub-iconics

    enjoy & leave feedback :)
     
  2. BLoodstaiN`

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    Vet nummer, ook tof dak weet dat er iemand op 't forum zit da nie ver van ik woont, ;p

    The only comment i can give you is that i don't hear your kick & snare that good, as other tracks like
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hRISmoLyung
    Like the rest pretty much

    Followed op soundcloud btw ;p
    Greets from bruges
     
  3. W1NTLE

    W1NTLE Ipswitched Suffolk

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    yer your mans right where has tha kick gone cant find it mate.loving the wonkyness of the rest of tune

    find your kick and repost it
     
  4. djdevz

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    *looks for kick*

    i think some basic eq n volume adjustment should do the trick, some funky sounds though, feeling it.

    i think u need a big kick/snare (at least a big kick) n it would really drop nicely..if u can just sample a kick from another similar electro track, a lot of them have the kick on its own at the beginning of the track.
     
  5. prettyherb

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    problem is pc got crashed and i lost the project and the plugins i used to make the bass & stuff...
    when i get pc back, i'll try a kick :)

    ---------- Post added at 18:42 ---------- Previous post was at 18:40 ----------

    bruges.. nice :)
    Yes, i tried to turn it louder, but than it sounds like overwhelming the bass & stuff... but i'll keep searching
    tnx for the feedback from bruges :p
     
  6. AzeRoon

    AzeRoon eidam Cheese

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    Not bad, but i think it needs a lot of additional tuning. Sounds too acid-like to me. But on the brighter note those beeps reminded me of the old Super Mario times :D

    I'd suggest some pads, punchier kick and some enhancement for the actual idea you got there.