Can see what kind of vibe you're going for with this.
Intro I like (Snare I'm a little on the fence about i'd prefer something more snappy) but I never use splashy snares so that might just be me being a sausage // Drop worked well, I like the bassline quite funky reminds me off an old tune I can't recall now. I deffinitely would have loved some kind of background element. I kept thinking of a very subtle but eventually loud riser / air horn type thing. Something like what Noisa and them lot use to keep the energy.
I'd probably try adding a really snappy break under with a high pass maybe from the drop or from 32 after!
Regardless had my head bobbing!