TheBird - need feedback

[lukeekulluke]

Its just a litle work in progress, first time ive been making dnb, could do with some feedback to know whats workin well and what isnt, be brutal. Sound.

http://soundcloud.com/rubicon-guava/thebird

 

[subprime]

What's working well: your ideas.

Need to get the balance of all your elements right I reckon. The melodic elements in the intro are good, but could be stronger in themselves and against the drums. The sub after the drop is well loud (look at the waveform to see that) The kick could do with some weight behind it, especially after the drop.

Keep at it.