PopCycle - SubWrap - HipHop DnB

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by bansal321, Aug 4, 2011.

  1. bansal321

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    FEEDBACK NEEDED, what you liked, what you didnt?
     
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    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    Over all I liked the song. I like the music and I thought the drum and bass part was pretty tight, except at around 2:20 when this loud high pitch ummm came in. I like the wobble part too. I did not like the drums for the hip-hop beat. I found them to be kind of week and not in place with your over all sound.
    the vocals
    I like your or who ever's voice. I like how you time your rymes . I do think you need to layer up your vocals. Again they are coming in a little week. I also wanted to hear a rap over the drum and bass part. Hope this helps.
    You got my props.
     
  3. bansal321

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    Again thankyou for checking out the track!!

    i trialed with using a filter on the hip hop drums because i wanted it all to sound a little retro and not so polished if u get what i mean?
    but im going to see if i can impliment the rapping over the dnb kit
     
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    I like the vocal as well, you could add a compressed dry layer there to balance the reverb. Would have liked to hear more too.

    The bit around the introduction of the female vocal was a bit messy and part of the vocal itself sounded off key to me?

    Over-all the fact that you've got a lot of elements following the same basic melody probably doesn't add much depth.

    But I do like the actual track, got potential.
     
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    cheers for checking out the track, im going to go back to the drawing board with this, ill post the updated track soon
     
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    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    Cool I want to hear it.