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[cactopus]

Track is called Breeding; although I have made a bunch of tracks, this one I am really happy with for the most part, post feedback please.

https://soundcloud.com/cactopus%2Fbreeding

 

[Jwood27]

really like the drums, needs something more though, that synthy thing is good but needs moderation and something else to keep it interesting imo

 

[awfulmodel]

Not bad man. I agree with jwood about it could use something else though maybe more of the drum part on like 1:00

 

[cactopus]

@awfulmodel, good suggestion. do you think i should lengthen the drum part or add another as a break later in the song? i was thinking the same thing myself today.

@jwood, i also agree about the keeping the synth in moderation. i need to go back and edit that.

do you think adding some background voice samples and maybe some ambient sound would spruce the middle section of the song up a bit? that was what i had in mind. but i really like being able to recieve outside opinions so please give them to me haha

 

[awfulmodel]

I wouldn't lengthen it, I'd use it elsewhere in the song prob

 

[IV4]

Try changing the drum pattern more often.