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Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by cactopus, May 22, 2011.

  1. cactopus

    cactopus Producer

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    Track is called Breeding; although I have made a bunch of tracks, this one I am really happy with for the most part, post feedback please.


     
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    really like the drums, needs something more though, that synthy thing is good but needs moderation and something else to keep it interesting imo
     
  3. awfulmodel

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    Not bad man. I agree with jwood about it could use something else though maybe more of the drum part on like 1:00
     
  4. cactopus

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    @awfulmodel, good suggestion. do you think i should lengthen the drum part or add another as a break later in the song? i was thinking the same thing myself today.

    @jwood, i also agree about the keeping the synth in moderation. i need to go back and edit that.

    do you think adding some background voice samples and maybe some ambient sound would spruce the middle section of the song up a bit? that was what i had in mind. but i really like being able to recieve outside opinions so please give them to me haha
     
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    I wouldn't lengthen it, I'd use it elsewhere in the song prob
     
  6. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    Try changing the drum pattern more often.