PATHOGEN - VENOM

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by MARKLAR, Jan 23, 2014.

  1. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    another dark kinda tune
    all feedback is good
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    RUSSLA DNBF Monarch

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    Make more stuff like this Si for realz man! fucking heavy!
     
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  3. Norax

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    k you can't drop harder than that :D sick sick bass... now you just have to spend time on making a nice intro and mastering and this would be signable :eek:
     
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    cheers guys
     
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    Yeah, bass is nasty. Over-all lacks a bit of flow but the basis of the drop is awesome. In your melodic/liquid/ambient tunes you're good at filling out the spectrum with different layers, a bit of that here would be good as the tune goes on.
     
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    intro could do with a bit of work, build up definitely needs more going on. bass is flipping rude, cant fault it at all as far as the sounds youve got going on. but yeah it would have more impact with a strong intro to build up the the drop. also possibly add some more music elements here and there to add a bit of variety? just imo
     
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    I really like the bassline here; reminds me a little of the one from the Phace track "Alive" in a subtle way. Like it's been said before tho, the intro could do with some spicing up.
     
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    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    cheers guys
    agree on the intro gonna have to change that up