Yeah it's a really nice track this one. We're working on a similar sort of style at the moment and ironically ours has rain on it too and strings. Love the string and piano work in this one though, sounds very nice. I had a look at one of the comments made by the dude in green about the track not saying anything, and I'm guessing that may be more to do with the current arrangement as it builds into a track then finishes without some sort of defining break anywhere. Headphones are always going to limit you as to how you can get a mix together but you have done really well considering.