Nostalgia(liquid funk) Please rate/comment

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Baas(Bays), Jun 9, 2010.

  1. Baas(Bays)

    Baas(Bays) New Member

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    Hi guys,
    Here is a liquid tune I have been workin on. Its a laid back tune and Im happy with it but I'd like to hear what u guys think. Any praise or criticisms welcome, I appreciate anyone takin the time to listen to my song and If you havea song youd like me to listen to and return the favor, id be happy to.

    http://soundcloud.com/baastracks/nostalgia

    thanks,
    Baas
     
  2. ali^

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    hey dude, i can see what you're going for but, i still think you need a lot more life in them drums, and try to use a few different sounds throughout to keep it interesting, if you're gonna make a basic melody you've gotta keep it interesting