Nostalgia(liquid funk) Please rate/comment

[Baas(Bays)]

Hi guys,
Here is a liquid tune I have been workin on. Its a laid back tune and Im happy with it but I'd like to hear what u guys think. Any praise or criticisms welcome, I appreciate anyone takin the time to listen to my song and If you havea song youd like me to listen to and return the favor, id be happy to.

http://soundcloud.com/baastracks/nostalgia

thanks,
Baas

 

[ali^]

hey dude, i can see what you're going for but, i still think you need a lot more life in them drums, and try to use a few different sounds throughout to keep it interesting, if you're gonna make a basic melody you've gotta keep it interesting