New work in progress (Nothing) DnB

[Catchem]

Haven't posted in a while thought i would share my latest work in progress let me know what you think criticism always appreciated
http://soundcloud.com/catchem/nothing-worin-progress

 

[Twistedprod]

Maby a bit to fast...and alot high-freqs... but makes sense overall

 

[Catchem]

cheers trying to work them out

 

[AzeRoon]

Play more with the Intro, think about it and use more ideas. Also add more variability and use repeat less. It becomes boring when you use too much repeating and add no new elements.

Definitely use some bassline, or use stronger if there's any. I can't hear any bassline in there.
But the track has some idea within, you just need to work on it and it might be cool when it's done.
Peace

 

[Catchem]

reworked a bit

 

[Catchem]

worked on the bass still need to add some variables