New tune I've been working on

[MentalFrame]

Hey guys,

haven't been here nor produced in a pretty long time and just started working on this tune. I'd love some feedback on my drums, the overall mix and the general feel of the tune. Any criticism is welcomed. And yea, this is still a work in progress.

Thanks guys

https://soundcloud.com/mental_frame%2Fpear-slave

 

[JoJabes]

Hey Mate, the track sounds to compressed. you should change that. Also the drums need more layering i think. Other that the melodic ideas are nice, and will come to life even more as soon as there are some transients back

 

[xiris]

cool idea, i like the reverb drum hits through the intro
that snare is bright, the hi hats are waaaayyy to thin, and the drums overall lack that "slap", though the snare isn't the worst.
interesting idea, and not a bad go for a new producer by any means.. i'm not hearing anything interesting in that bass end, your low notes are really low too.. too low for my sub to play..

 

[dannerz420]

i cant hear the kick at all but im just listening with laptop speakers.

 

[dannerz420]

"general feel of the tune" it seems to have emotion and is not random.