new tune up

tormalean

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fremantle,wa
hello dnb forum crew

i just finished a new tune.Its called chemical therapy

but the myspace player is not the best quality and the full version is much more clearer when i play it on cd or mix it in to other tunes

but if any one gets the time to listen that would be good

peace

www.myspace.com/djtormalean


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Evening bud
having a listen drums sound muffled thinking its the player tho
well layed out
yea i like it the big drop it the middles real nice
not shabby at all :)

keep it up
 
Hello mate. like the drop. unusual and full of suspence.
like the little breath noises and what sounds like panting between the drum hits.
is lacking something tho mate, not sure what.
soz i cant be more specific.
peace
 
A smoother, more followable bassline is what it needs, you have those bass hits going there but you cant really tell where it's going. Or a hook of some other kind that keeps it interesting, a vocal snippet maybe or a synth lead or... something. As it is it's kind of open.
 
yeah thanks for the replys peps and thanks for listening
and yeah i might add somethin else to this tune but its def' push my little ol' laptop to the limit ha ha ha

but yeah its all good and i think on here everyones tunes are gettin sweet but i listen to this tune about 200000000000000000000000676843322200000000
times so i need to propbablyt go back to this tune a couple of weeks

but thanks for listening
 
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