new tune up

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by tormalean, Oct 24, 2008.

  1. tormalean

    tormalean Member

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    hello dnb forum crew

    i just finished a new tune.Its called chemical therapy

    but the myspace player is not the best quality and the full version is much more clearer when i play it on cd or mix it in to other tunes

    but if any one gets the time to listen that would be good

    peace

    www.myspace.com/djtormalean


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  2. Hightech

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    Evening bud
    having a listen drums sound muffled thinking its the player tho
    well layed out
    yea i like it the big drop it the middles real nice
    not shabby at all :)

    keep it up
     
  3. Fratanize

    Fratanize Keepin the jungle alive

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    Hello mate. like the drop. unusual and full of suspence.
    like the little breath noises and what sounds like panting between the drum hits.
    is lacking something tho mate, not sure what.
    soz i cant be more specific.
    peace
     
  4. kama

    kama benkama.net

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    A smoother, more followable bassline is what it needs, you have those bass hits going there but you cant really tell where it's going. Or a hook of some other kind that keeps it interesting, a vocal snippet maybe or a synth lead or... something. As it is it's kind of open.
     
  5. tormalean

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    yeah thanks for the replys peps and thanks for listening
    and yeah i might add somethin else to this tune but its def' push my little ol' laptop to the limit ha ha ha

    but yeah its all good and i think on here everyones tunes are gettin sweet but i listen to this tune about 200000000000000000000000676843322200000000
    times so i need to propbablyt go back to this tune a couple of weeks

    but thanks for listening
     
  6. HYBRID

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    best way. give it some time and come back with fresh ears.
    wicked track by the way.
    respect
     
  7. tormalean

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    :):) yeah thanks for the ideas i might give som more atmospherics
    or something

    but nice one for listening