New Tune - Afterdawn - Liquid/Mellow

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Alexi, Feb 28, 2009.

  1. Alexi

    Alexi Drench Audio

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    Alright,

    Check out my new tune called Afterdawn, it's on a liquid mellow tip.

    http://myspace.com/alexidnb
    (First tune on the player)


    Feedback would be great, Cheers
     
  2. Karl Kronic

    Karl Kronic New Member

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    Very chilled, I like it a lot. This is the sort of ambient DNB I like to listen to when I'm writing / working for hours.

    I'd like to hear a few more layers (synths, percussion) in there, plus maybe a bit more compression on everything (especially the bass) as the mix sounds a little 'empty' in some places. Apart from that it's very sweet sounding, and I like it a lot. Also, your other tunes are heavy, keep up the good work!!!
     
  3. Alexi

    Alexi Drench Audio

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    cheers for the feedback mate, glad you like it.

    I know the mix doesn't sound that good, so it's just a demo at the moment, and needs some work to beef it up a bit
     
  4. co0ke

    co0ke windowlicker

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    nice tune man. real rolling and mellow. start. avnt really got anything to say on how to improve it, jus keep doin what u do. look forward to hearin more.

    love the cowbell in footsoldier!
    :cowbell:
     
  5. Alexi

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    A tune's not complete until it has at least 3 layers of cowbell lol
     
  6. Zeal

    Zeal Ohm/C2D/Dark Asylum/Ennex

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    locked......

    Drums dont seem to bad in intro

    not ito the bark sample, but i used that myself years ago so thats probably why hahaha

    Drop is relaxing. not much low end tho sub defo needs to come up

    the tune gets quite repetative up untill the switch up, could just do with soime fills and extra sounds to keep iut flowing nicely

    good effort there man, keep at it :)
     
  7. Alexi

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    I'd been listening to shock out VIP and the bark seemed like a good idea at the time.

    Was just a quick mixdown in headphones so the sub will be louder in the proper mix, and i've been workin on switching the tune up

    Cheers for the advice mate
     
  8. The Hex

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    nice tune man. very smooth and relaxing. for a quick mix down it sounds not bad at all. keep up the good work man!
     
  9. Alexi

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    Cheers mate
     
  10. Welsh Junglist

    Welsh Junglist AKA Faqade

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    Had a listen, I like the idea of it, like Zeal said it does get a little repetative so maybe add some variation to the bassline after a couple of bars. It might just be me but I think the drums need to be more upfront in the mix as they sound a little quiet compared to the bassline. I think adding a few variations to the drums might work nicely, maybe a drum roll here and there, duno man just try a few different things and see how they sound. Keep it up mate (y)
     
  11. chromey

    chromey a.k.a Impact

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    Liking the vibe on this!
    Just my cup of tea.
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    Very easy on the ear, (if a little samey in places-sorry).
    Pads are nice, solid melody.
    Drums are low in the mix, but no bad thing.
    Sub is restrained, which is nice and different. :)

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    Not keen on the 'scratch' (the bark?) sample.

    Good work fella, will listen to your other tunes over the next day or so..
     
  12. Alexi

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    Yeah I agree, after the initial ideas I found it quite difficult to find logical variations which didn't sound out of place as some of the stuff I tried made it song like it was cutting to a different tune