risto orpus
Risto
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New track i recently finished, would be glad to hear some honest opinions about my track 
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Inna Selez
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- Jul 31, 2017
Very nice space atmosphere. Do you planing make it longer or it is a whole track?
risto orpus
Risto
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Its the whole track, and thanks .
I replaced it with a tweaked version, fixed a little issues that troubled the ear.
.I replaced it with a tweaked version, fixed a little issues that troubled the ear.
Mentor & Moore
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It has indeed a nice space atmosphere! Maybe make the intro a bit shorter and after the first drop maybe a new verse and buildup to a second drop But good work so far !!
But good work so far !!
Aetherial
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I like the idea, the atmosphere is nice. Kick is a bit too subby imo but maybe that's your preference. It also gets a bit repetitive in the end. Try getting some variation in there throughout the track. Doesn't have to be really noticeable stuff but just to keep it interesting.
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I left feedback,
"I love the Leads, they are beautiful and sound like crystal angels floating in the sky. Mmmm, lovely Pad around 00:40ish. Production sounds great in my cheap headphones. The KD sounds fine, but I suppose a light and crispy hat type noise could brighten it up a bit if properly layered. Cool little piece, I like the graphic you associated with it."
"I love the Leads, they are beautiful and sound like crystal angels floating in the sky. Mmmm, lovely Pad around 00:40ish. Production sounds great in my cheap headphones. The KD sounds fine, but I suppose a light and crispy hat type noise could brighten it up a bit if properly layered. Cool little piece, I like the graphic you associated with it."
