It has indeed a nice space atmosphere! Maybe make the intro a bit shorter and after the first drop maybe a new verse and buildup to a second drop But good work so far !!
I like the idea, the atmosphere is nice. Kick is a bit too subby imo but maybe that's your preference. It also gets a bit repetitive in the end. Try getting some variation in there throughout the track. Doesn't have to be really noticeable stuff but just to keep it interesting.
"I love the Leads, they are beautiful and sound like crystal angels floating in the sky. Mmmm, lovely Pad around 00:40ish. Production sounds great in my cheap headphones. The KD sounds fine, but I suppose a light and crispy hat type noise could brighten it up a bit if properly layered. Cool little piece, I like the graphic you associated with it."