New track that I've edited for review please

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by gabs67, Jun 7, 2016.

  1. gabs67

    gabs67 Member

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    Hi All,

    I've made a few adjustments based on comments I received on my last track including removing the vocals. Please let me know what you think?

    Thanks in advance,

     
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  2. Derelicts Of Tomorrow

    Derelicts Of Tomorrow Breaksmith

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    the drums sound a little flat to me and i feel the shaker is a little to drum machine sounding but overall it's a nice tune