Drum & Bass New smooth track for comments...cheers

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by collymore, Dec 19, 2011.

  1. collymore

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    hi all....

    Working on this track and would really appreciate constructive comments. I am thinking of getting some vocals on it and maybe some more variations.

    Cheers,

     
  2. Ledge

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    Really like it, very chill. Some vocals would do it good!
    Can't really give you any constructive criticism though I'm just an amateur, but I think the bass might be a bit too overpowering.
     
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    i really like this, i think the levels are fine, loving the vocals in this.... actually just loving it all! great work!
     
  4. collymore

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    Thanks for the kind words...will keep me going on the track

     
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    liking the drums..pads are nice, the vocally pad could maybe do with a bit more delay/ reverb?

    piano might be a tad high in the mix

    drop.....

    bass sounds good to me, definately think the pianos a bit high in the mix
    great vibe youve got going on here, nice and chilled

    yeah i think variation would be good, the 2 note pad has been going from the start and it would be good to switch it up imo
    very good start mate
     
  6. underspawn

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    Incredibly chilled tune, really sexy vibes. However i agree that the piano could be lower in the mix and the drums could be just a lil bit higher.
     
  7. miszt

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    very nice work, to my ears ur percussion could come up a bit in the mix, and your melodic sounds can go down in the mix a bit, piano etc. percussion is a bit to constant, needs more fills/shuffles and hi-hat changes to keep things moving. vibe is blissful, nice work
     
  8. collymore

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    thanks for the feedback...I will defintly take your suggestions into mind. I agree with most of it....
    Cheers,

     
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    Oh, and instead of posting ur tune on every comment, just put it in ur sig. Less work for u and it won't look annoying :D