DnB New smooth track for comments...cheers

[collymore]

hi all....

Working on this track and would really appreciate constructive comments. I am thinking of getting some vocals on it and maybe some more variations.

Cheers,

https://soundcloud.com/cookie-jaar%2Fthe-fly-on-the-windscreen

 

[Ledge]

Really like it, very chill. Some vocals would do it good!
Can't really give you any constructive criticism though I'm just an amateur, but I think the bass might be a bit too overpowering.

 

[bansal321]

i really like this, i think the levels are fine, loving the vocals in this.... actually just loving it all! great work!

 

[collymore]

Thanks for the kind words...will keep me going on the track

https://soundcloud.com/cookie-jaar%2Fthe-fly-on-the-windscreen

 

[oversight]

liking the drums..pads are nice, the vocally pad could maybe do with a bit more delay/ reverb?

piano might be a tad high in the mix

drop.....

bass sounds good to me, definately think the pianos a bit high in the mix
great vibe youve got going on here, nice and chilled

yeah i think variation would be good, the 2 note pad has been going from the start and it would be good to switch it up imo
very good start mate

 

[underspawn]

Incredibly chilled tune, really sexy vibes. However i agree that the piano could be lower in the mix and the drums could be just a lil bit higher.

 

[miszt]

very nice work, to my ears ur percussion could come up a bit in the mix, and your melodic sounds can go down in the mix a bit, piano etc. percussion is a bit to constant, needs more fills/shuffles and hi-hat changes to keep things moving. vibe is blissful, nice work

 

[collymore]

thanks for the feedback...I will defintly take your suggestions into mind. I agree with most of it....
Cheers,

https://soundcloud.com/cookie-jaar%2Fthe-fly-on-the-windscreen

 

[underspawn]

Oh, and instead of posting ur tune on every comment, just put it in ur sig. Less work for u and it won't look annoying