i think its good man i really love the intro, got a kinda crazy feel to it. the ideas in this tune are sik i can see what your goin for, but it is very distorted when it drops. is there no way you could work with the background music instead of trying to supress it? this tune could work but it needs some serious cleaning up if your to get it soundin right. but keep at it tho man your on the right tracks. Ez!