New jungle tune " Spacin' love "

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Kibon, Sep 10, 2009.

  1. Kibon

    Kibon Blaze It Down !

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    I just finished a new jungle tune so all comments welcome (and needed)
    It's a tune to relax to, just smoke a spliff and lay back..

    http://soundcloud.com/sensimo

    Pz
     
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  2. subprime

    subprime Dysjoint

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    I don't smoke no spliffs for long time but I'm ears up anyhow.
    Needs a few level tweaks. Some of the edits are jumping out.
    Like the vocal.
     
  3. Kibon

    Kibon Blaze It Down !

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    Thanks for the comment !
     
  4. Kibon

    Kibon Blaze It Down !

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  5. TongueFlap

    TongueFlap Flappin'

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    work on the mixdown man, some levels are a bit high and some a bit low then some jump too high :D keep at it
     
  6. Dave Dexcell

    Dave Dexcell Dexcell

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    Easy!

    I love the ideas! 2many snaire rolls if u ask me. thats a really nice pad u have on the breakdown but theres a click at the start of every note put a tiny bit of attack on it ;)

    Other than that and the mixdown i like the tune man some wicked eliments to it!

    Keep at it!
     
  7. marcelkennard

    marcelkennard Storms comin in Annie

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    sounds quite good but aint finished though man, you can make the elements in the tune flow together more it sounds a bit jagged at the moment
     
  8. Kibon

    Kibon Blaze It Down !

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    Thanks for all the comments, I'm gonna work on the mixdown (this has always been my biggest problem .. )

    Pz
     
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  10. Lucidproduction

    Lucidproduction i aint fraid of no ghosts

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    yeah some good sounds going on man,

    but the amen cut out the rest of the track, i had to turn my speakers down when it came in, other than that its good work
     
  11. Protoplasym

    Protoplasym Nuskool

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    I enjoyed the start... but at 00:44... I think the uptempo drums come out of 'nowhere'. Not feelin the voc (appreciate what he's sayin though).

    Mix sounds level overall. Prod souds solid.


    During the 2nd Brkdwn... I can hear some pops on the attack of those Pad Stabs... maybe increase the attack a smidge on that patch??..


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