New hip hoppy kind of thing

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Sweaty Teddy, Aug 25, 2012.

  1. Sweaty Teddy

    Sweaty Teddy Nob'ed

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    New thing I'm working on, kind of hip hoppy, all guitar parts are played by me.

     
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    elmaruk slannndaaaaaaar

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    not bad but i think the beat should have come in full whack straight after the first stop
     
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    don't think the straight jazz kit works with the main kick and snare

    might try a delay on the guitar

    some reverb on the horns
     
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    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    I think we need neo mind to write some spanish lyrics.
     
  5. Sweaty Teddy

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    Know what ya mean but wanted it to have a bit more build up with the guitar lead before the drum beat kicks in might have to re-work the arrangement a bit

    Yeah not feeling it as much as I was might have to get a different beat in there, don't know about delay on guitae though unless it's done really subtely I don't think it would work that well, tried verb on the horns though and it sounding nicer

    haha send them my way if he does

    Cheers for all feed back guys