New hip hoppy kind of thing

[Sweaty Teddy]

New thing I'm working on, kind of hip hoppy, all guitar parts are played by me.

https://soundcloud.com/sweaty-teddy%2Fnew_thing

 

[elmaruk]

not bad but i think the beat should have come in full whack straight after the first stop

 

[equilibrium]

don't think the straight jazz kit works with the main kick and snare

might try a delay on the guitar

some reverb on the horns

 

[IV4]

I think we need neo mind to write some spanish lyrics.

 

[Sweaty Teddy]

not bad but i think the beat should have come in full whack straight after the first stop

Know what ya mean but wanted it to have a bit more build up with the guitar lead before the drum beat kicks in might have to re-work the arrangement a bit

don't think the straight jazz kit works with the main kick and snare

might try a delay on the guitar

some reverb on the horns

Yeah not feeling it as much as I was might have to get a different beat in there, don't know about delay on guitae though unless it's done really subtely I don't think it would work that well, tried verb on the horns though and it sounding nicer

I think we need neo mind to write some spanish lyrics.

haha send them my way if he does

Cheers for all feed back guys