NEW demo tune.

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by EsZe, Jul 21, 2008.

  1. EsZe

    EsZe New Member

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    Whats up,

    This is my first time posting on this site.
    Just finished a new tune "Nell"

    www.myspace.com/syntere

    Let me know what you think.

    Peace,

    SZ
     
    Last edited: Jul 22, 2008
  2. Fratanize

    Fratanize Keepin the jungle alive

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    stick a www. in front of your myspace and it wil serve as a link.
    people will only listen if its easy to click to. lazy i know, but they are going out of their way. will have a quick listen mate.
    Nice mellow intro. Like the bongos.
    Nice sweeping phaser on the drums. Nice synths. Bassline is v. nice and unexpected.
    This is a well produced tune. I'm thinking you should send this to hospital records.
    The bassline cuts out at about 3.25. sounds a bit dodgy. Only critism i got.
    Nice one.
    respect
     
  3. skeez

    skeez Nuke 'em all !

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    As Fratanize said.
    Nice mellow intro (not like that style too much, but it's still good), I don't like the "break" in 1:28, it's too unexpected for me. Good synth.
    When the bass comes in, the drums are muffled. I almost don't hear the snare, try to pump it @ 2kHz.

    Overall it's nice tune, but it needs more variations in my opinion.


    peace, skeez
     
  4. thin king

    thin king Member

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    I'm with skeez on this one - that drop should be before drums kick in properly its way too unexpected and makes the intro confusing. The second tune on your player is way better real good piece of music that - not just a dance track :)