New Artist In the scene, Peak Rays - Stand On

[PeakRays]

Hey Guys,

I'm new to all this and this is my first time posting here but I've been working on building up my music career. I do a few genres but I'm here to share my liquid drum and bass tracks this particular track will be available in leading music sites soon (on the 2nd I believe) but you are free to listen to it on my SoundCloud.

https://soundcloud.com/user-883755370%2Fpeak-rays-stand-on

 

[Leniz]

Nice tune. You have still lots to learn. The forum has a production thread tjere is alot of info that can help you improve your music Your new tunes or wips can be posted in the New Talents & Tracks section in the Production thread and people can give feedback. Anyway welcome man

 

[Leniz]

To give feedback on the tune: work on your drums. They’re good only a bit weak. Adding punch would improve the tune alot. Also dont mind to add a small delay and reverb on the vox. Same with the other elements in the tune. It sounds kinda dry

 

[PeakRays]

Hey man,
I definitely appreciate the feedback it's not released yet so I'm going to work on touching up those few things you mentioned. thanks again! I do have another one that I will be posting on SoundCloud tomorrow which does have these aspects so look out for that if you're interested .

 

[Dan JJJJJJ]

No offence. cos it's tight and nice, but it sort of just sounds like a pop tune that happens to have a pretty simple D+B beat over it