My tune - Something Special

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by ac, Feb 14, 2009.

  1. ac

    ac I've been naughty, I'm banned

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    So I have the song in its raw layout. Just need some tips and/or advice from the boffs as to what can be changed/improved i.e length, melody, EQ etc.

    Thank you

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    In particular, I'm not entirely good at the outro, it seems too change to suddenly and doesn't have a great ending.
     
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  2. RevTech

    RevTech Butthole=output transduce

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    That link is hating me at the mo, I'll check back in a few and give some feedback.
     
  3. ac

    ac I've been naughty, I'm banned

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    Link fixed.
     
  4. KEMZ

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    ez ac, good effort here bro, the bass in nice n clear! i would def throw a few delayed effects in there to give it some dynamics, maybe some more layered filtered out drums, hats, shakers that kind a thing. bring that creepy pad into the mix more, filter it about n stuff... just need soemthing like a few more breaks to pick up the pace, a breakdown maybe too

    i like it tho man, neat idea
     
  5. KaztrO

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    Drums are clear, but the rest is too low. Raise up the Pad, and give a little more variation to everything.

    GreetZ
    KaztrO
     
  6. ac

    ac I've been naughty, I'm banned

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    If only I knew how to do all that stuff :( But thanks for the input guys (y)
     
  7. ashey

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    Nice beatz man, + minmal style (y) 1 o the best beats I've heard on ere - fair play man.