some really great ellements, and its hard to comment, but ill tell you what I like
its nice and dark and moody, with out sounding to yardy, which to much dubstep hits on these days
intro seems to long, but think that in the works as you say
at the end of everty few bars it goes dur ner, dur ner, which for me seems to be out pace with the rest of the pace of the tun and my head bobbin, ( which it was by the way big up), is thrown out of rhythm, I know ppl like to produce like this, and if that what your going for fair enuff, but for me, it lost the vibe.
nice changes, intersting, i like simple dubstep to, but its gotta have a killa vibe if in gonna be plain, you changes kkept me listining
hard to belive its your 1st tune, but regardless keep it up, and make sum dnb
take what i say how you like, im no expert but i listen to ALOT of music, prob every dnb tack that comes our, and my mates pummle me with ubstep and breaks all the time, which is nice as i like to listen to it, sadly, it doesnt have the energy for me to enjoy mixing it, although, the plumps may have change my outlook on breaks friday night, im rambling now so will bugger off
pce