My first track EVER, be gentle!

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by YOUNG TUNA, Jul 23, 2008.

  1. YOUNG TUNA

    YOUNG TUNA IT'S ME BITCHES

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  2. Blurr

    Blurr Wasted Selection

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    thats sum quality shit mate

    can't really give you any production tips but it sounds like ur heading the right way
    all i'd say is its not repetitive enough, but i do like that bass
     
  3. YOUNG TUNA

    YOUNG TUNA IT'S ME BITCHES

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    Thanks for the feedback blad (y)

    I dunno should it be MORE repeatitive? I was like trying to make it NOT repeatitive hmmmm haha, but yeah still go a lot of work to do.
     
  4. safety

    safety double safety

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    two words for you (and i think you know what they are)











































































    more :cowbell:
     
  5. YOUNG TUNA

    YOUNG TUNA IT'S ME BITCHES

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    :cowbell::cowbell::cowbell::cowbell::cowbell::cowbell:
     
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    Blurr Wasted Selection

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    if thats what ur going for then fair play

    but defo more :cowbell:
     
  7. MARKLAR

    MARKLAR International Tracksuit Salesman

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    sick tune mate!
    really good for ur first tune!
     
  8. JAGZ

    JAGZ Well-Known Member

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    sick tune tuna
    samples phat
    i thought that the speech was going to be the whole track but it dropped nicely and got my head boppin
    crazy ass basses in there
    you got some skills man keep on it bro
     
  9. Berlitz

    Berlitz "JUnGle BiZneSS"

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    Im liking it

    I agree more :cowbell:
     
  10. intafuze

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    yeah man wicked!! grimey bizzz
     
  11. YOUNG TUNA

    YOUNG TUNA IT'S ME BITCHES

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    i know i think i'm redoing the whole intro again, peeps say it's too long and shit and i think i agree

    biggup for the feedback blad (y)

    haha warm words from the don himself, SAAAAAFE BLAD

    really dunno shit about producing yet but i'm learning, just heard about "mastering" like yesterday haha



    Thanks a lot about the feedback fellas, Berlitz and intafuze too! I'll post the finished version some day that was basically done in 8 hours or something. Saaaaaaaaaaaafe

    (y)(y)(y)(y)(y)
     
  12. DJNitrousUK

    DJNitrousUK Active Member

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    I knew this was gonna be a Dubstep tune, I know you love your Dubstep Tuna :D

    Big tune man, love that intro & the drop!

    More (y)
     
  13. DnB_Arena

    DnB_Arena MAssivE!!!!

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    i'm still struggling to understand dubstep but optimus fucking rocks

    nice one man
     
  14. YOUNG TUNA

    YOUNG TUNA IT'S ME BITCHES

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    bwoy betta know! :inlove:

    cheers for the feedback blads (y)
     
  15. dar kist

    dar kist KYRO

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    i really like my dubstep, cool intro, sounds pretty mean, all gets a lil crazy, could tone it down a lil, its all about the minimalist's when it comes to d step, still nice tune bro, check out my tune GEBERATION if you into Dstep
     
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    YOUNG TUNA IT'S ME BITCHES

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    i know i gotta work on the intro, and yeah it gets a little bit too crazy after the drop i really gotta work on those EQ's and shit to keep it more together, had a lot of good feedback about it and im learning all the time, really appreciate the feedback blad especially from you i know you know the binniz in this dropped GEISHA to the local dubstep fam and they really liked it gonna drop it at the next party im playing peeps gonna love it i swear dun

    biggup! (y)
     
  17. skeez

    skeez Nuke 'em all !

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    Your first track, huh?
    yeah, sure...
     
  18. Joey AdhD

    Joey AdhD sweaty scouser

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    EERRMMM....1st choon mate...thats a fuckin stonker, lovin the non repetivness really, the transformers sample works dead well...well done mate lovin this one...:cowbell:
     
  19. Kibon

    Kibon Blaze It Down !

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    wicked intro ! but for me it changes it a bit to fast , maybe some more repeating .. but still really nice for a first tune !
     
  20. Snowgirl

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    Hey, I liked it! Especially liked the change, I don't think it needs to be more repetitive!