My first proper(ish) song - Dying Time

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Wellsy, Apr 3, 2009.

  1. Wellsy

    Wellsy Member

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    Just finished a quick track done on fruity loops, quite a heavy bassline which Im sure will please:twisted: havnt got an ending or interlude yet, still abit of a production Noob so any feedback/tips would be much appreciated :)

    http://www.zshare.net/audio/58142475387b6db0/
     
  2. Dj Dirty Pimp

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    keep it up mate. for a 1st song thats good!

    it will come in time

    work on ur drums a bit, heres a good tutorial, u need to layer some breakbeats in there( sample them then chop n stretch them so they fit)

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SYMC57ldgE4

    as for the bass keep working at it man, tweek it, mayby try eqing out some elements of it using fruity parametric eq (1 or 2)
     
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    Zeal Ohm/C2D/Dark Asylum/Ennex

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  4. Wellsy

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    Nice one, cheers for the info fellas!
     
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    Lucidproduction i aint fraid of no ghosts

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    yeah i found that C&S to be quite helpful but those boys got bare layers