My first proper(ish) song - Dying Time

[Wellsy]

Just finished a quick track done on fruity loops, quite a heavy bassline which Im sure will please havnt got an ending or interlude yet, still abit of a production Noob so any feedback/tips would be much appreciated

http://www.zshare.net/audio/58142475387b6db0/

 

[Dj Dirty Pimp]

keep it up mate. for a 1st song thats good!

it will come in time

work on ur drums a bit, heres a good tutorial, u need to layer some breakbeats in there( sample them then chop n stretch them so they fit)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SYMC57ldgE4

as for the bass keep working at it man, tweek it, mayby try eqing out some elements of it using fruity parametric eq (1 or 2)

 

[Zeal]

Yeah first effort good stuff man

can see know what you want in a tune

Like said above all about working the drums

using various layers to fill them up and make them mroe punchy

I got a decent tutorial for drums on here:

http://dnbforum.com/showthread.php?t=54070&page=6&highlight=zeal+drum+tutorial

 

[Wellsy]

Nice one, cheers for the info fellas!

 

[Lucidproduction]

yeah i found that C&S to be quite helpful but those boys got bare layers