My First produced tune (Jump Up)

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Brought fruity loops on monday and i've never really tried producing but i had a little bash and put this together

http://soundcloud.com/code-redd

its the second one on the page entitled buzzin'

feedback plz =)

 

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any feedback please?

 

[msmith222]

the drums kick and snare sound a little flat. you did a pretty good job of filling the frequency ranges, nice job with the tempo switch. the siren lead is a little much for me, but this has potential. keep working with it!

 

[Code:Red]

ok cheers mate thanks alot!