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Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by DubC, Nov 3, 2008.

  1. DubC

    DubC Close your ears!

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    Tune called Jungle Press on my myspace.
    Have a listen and let me know what you think. Any ideas for improvement or changes would be much appreciated. Easy.
     
  2. Hightech

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    hay man just had a listen sounds to me like ur only in it for the money ae ae ae ae ae ae ae ae ae ae

    anyway
    keep working on u ur drums kick at the start felt lil bit stail
    bass was nice n deep tho but also felt like it was happening to much too
    imo

    chur
     
  3. DubC

    DubC Close your ears!

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    Nice one for the reply bro'. The lyric is really cool in this track, and really true too. =] I've only just made this track, like yesterday, so I'm trying to gather together some feedback so I can work on it. Thanks again though, much respect. Easy.
     
  4. RoyalJump

    RoyalJump Shrust

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    The Sound is great. Cool Ambient style. But you must make the drums (kicks at the beginning) better =)
    The rest of the Track is really nice.

    Greetz RJR Chris
     
  5. logikz

    logikz I Am Not The King Staff Member

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    i agree, very agreeable sound, i dig the style, just need to keep grafting is all, youre obviously talented
     
  6. DubC

    DubC Close your ears!

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    =] Thanks for the kinds words, I'll spend some time on this track and improve on where you've advised. I'll let you know how it goes. Easy.
     
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    Positiv B New Member

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    Nice vibes in these tunes man! Escalade is wicked!! Respect!
     
  8. Zeal

    Zeal Ohm/C2D/Dark Asylum/Ennex

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    intro sample is kool, i like that. Think the hats need to be brighter though

    Drop doesnt really have much impact, drums seem quite flappy too

    drums defo need more weight to the kick n snare at least!

    Bass isnt too bad, its there and does the job

    liking the atmos created and fx most in this tune

    good effort man :)
     
  9. mikeOO1

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    smooth man. this track would've helped me out the other night. lol
     
  10. DubC

    DubC Close your ears!

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    =] Cheers guys, thanks a lot for your relplys.
     
  11. intafuze

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    soundin pretty fat mate,hats/backbeats needs more brightness imo kick soundin pretty punchy snr maybe needs bit more fullness imo vibes r nice bass is soundin fat keep it comin mannnnnnnn
     
  12. Saint

    Saint Buried Audio

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    Yeah man, liking it. I think the only thing (although its been said before)is the drop is lacking a bit, its a nice bassline that comes in, but it doesn't have any punch to it.

    Good shit man!
     
  13. DubC

    DubC Close your ears!

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    I've made lots of changes to Jungle Press for anyone who wants to listen. =] Changed the into, hi hats, bassdrum, breakdown and the first drop. Thanks to everyone who's left feedback and advice, I really appreciate it.