hi,
its quite hard to listen to m8 - mainly because the drums are kinda boring. kick snare kicksnare. then a triple kick. no variation. sorry man
try adding some other percussion elements to give your track more interest. - high hats, shaker, cymbals, ghost snare. or even bring in a loop (stick an Amen over it for example)
i do like your lead n piano though - again more variation there would add more interest.
peace