Yes yes, 100% improvement from your earlier clips, get on the darkside! Like bad ace said phatten up with some snares, maybe take a touch of the distortion on the bass down. When you get it finished, hit me up a PM, an I might be able to slip it in the radio shows somewhere.
If you get a few minutes, check my tunes, 'Beneath the Surface' an a remix i did of a bad ace tune. lemme know what you think 8)