Kroppah - Particle Collision

[mr meh]

Been working on this recently, think I'm pretty much finished with it now.
Any feedback or suggestions would be good, cheers

https://soundcloud.com/kroppah%2Fkroppah-particle-collision

 

[IV4]

You need more automation on your tracks. Make them constantly evolving to make the track more interesting. Like the way a 303 in house tracks is always changing, but over the course of 8 or 16 bars. Also, your bass is cool, but don't be afraid try weird stuff. For example, instead of using one long note, divide that note into 4 or 5 single notes. Then add a pitch bend to the notes. Sorry for scathing review, the track over all is not that bad. It is getting to the point where I believe you need to start nailing down details.