Hows this sound for a struggling wannabe producer?

[dj mirry]

What more does this track need? or what are the mistakes present in the track?

Help and feedback much appreciated

https://soundcloud.com/dj-miracle-2%2Frain

 

[Alien Exposure]

Nice mood in it, personally i think the snare should be more... centered? it kinda sounds like its wide and doesnt hit very much. Keep it up the good stuff!

 

[Shy Owl]

Can't really provide much feedback on the mix down but I agree that snare needs to be brought out; it's seeming a little lost at the moment. I'd hazard a guess at EQing. If you're happy with where your snare peaks as it is then try carving space in your bass at the same frequency range to give it that little bit more room to push though, otherwise think about changing a layer in your snare or adjusting the peak entirely. No such problem for your kick though. Nice work.

 

[dj mirry]

Thanks for the feedback guys