From the Sun - DropKick, Noob artist, would love some C and C and feedback please!

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Trenton, Jan 3, 2010.

  1. Trenton

    Trenton New Member

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    My First Song, just a preview (I'm slightly lost with what else to put in it atm!). I have a feeling some of the volume levels are off! Need some help to fix it on fl studio 9 if thats alright? First post as well! So any Feedback and C and C/Tips would be great!

    Many thanks,
    Trenton.

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FOE2mDyjb2Q
     
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  2. demonicdnb

    demonicdnb got duct-tape?

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    Re: From the Sun - DropKick, Noob artist, would love some C and C and feedback please

    ill bite, but being this is your first post you're not likely to get much out of these guys. make your way around and contribute a bit first homeboy.

    as for the review.

    im diggin the 8 bit sound on some of your hits but unfortunatley the drums sound straight out of an 808. which is bad. the drop is OK, i dont like the way the bass is coming thru but i do like that you've really got it moving around. those stabs at 2:55 are really annoying, maybee just do one and repeat it with some echo/delay.
    keep it up. good concept.
     
  3. Trenton

    Trenton New Member

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    Re: From the Sun - DropKick, Noob artist, would love some C and C and feedback please

    Hey there!
    Thanks a lot for C and C and all. Sorry but what do you mean by an 808? Do you think I should make the bass sound more punchy and lower? Yes the stabs at the end were just there to fill in time (Laughs). I haven't completely sussed out the rest of the song yet.
    Thanks a lot for the tips anyway!
    I'll try help around in the forum now!
    Trenton.
     
  4. subprime

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    Re: From the Sun - DropKick, Noob artist, would love some C and C and feedback please

    You need to work on your song structure. It sounds like you've just dropped a bunch of samples in the Daw.
    But for a first tune that's fine, just keep making music.