I listened to it. Its cute and nice but honestly it sounds more "force & styles" HHC to me then 'ardkore. This is mainly due to the 'modern' sound you used in the intro, and the clownstep drum rolls which give it a stompy hhc feel along with the 4/4 beats.
Did you ever listen to that "Zombie Dawn" track I had in this folder a while back? What did you think (even if you hated it)?
If you change it make sure you save it as a new file because with this version here, you could market as a clownstep track. Alls you would need to do is cut and paste a hackny baron CS bassline into it and presto, instant clownstep. You aught to do a version like that for kicks.