Fortune - Realisations

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Fortune^, Oct 23, 2011.

  1. Fortune^

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    Shock! Horror! I've produced a tune by myself!

    Didn't have much feedback during the creative process so any feedback is welcomed!

     
  2. vexx

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    wicked percussion mate! bass is thumping.

    LOVE your late night tune, vibesss
     
  3. ExplodingMan

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    Liking it mate! sick drums got a real bukem vibe. Wouldn't mind a bit more sub tho. The bass is quite middy.
     
  4. Mr Fletch

    Mr Fletch aka KRONIX

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    Awesome intro.....very 70's American cheese.........then the drop!
     
  5. subprime

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    Love the drums work :)
     
  6. Fortune^

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    Cheers for all the feedback guys!
     
  7. Fishy:)

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    AHHH YESSSSS the pad is sweet as fuck. not feelin that bass at all tho, and way too fast transition beofre it starts. drums are sounding to simle and static for me, not really feelin the samples used either
     
  8. bansal321

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    im liking the intro and drums in this 1 pal!
     
  9. Fortune^

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    Nice one Fishy, always good to have some negative/constructive feedback.

    I was wondering if the pad was a little too much apart from this and I recognise that there are some changes to be made basswise.

    Cheers Guys.
     
  10. nusphere

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    The kick and snare pattern is too complex too often, if you have a more simple pattern for most of a phrase then use the more complex pattern for emphasis at the end of a 4 or 8 bar loop, then have a whole section where the drumming can go very abstract. Shakers and wot not could give more life to your drums too.