first tune

[maca73]

Hi,
this is the first tune I have made,I have only had logic software for just over 2 months,any feedback appreciated

https://soundcloud.com/craig973

Thanks

 

[JoErOe]

nice man, solid work for the time spent. the ideas are all fine here. just need things to punch a bit harder. dive in to youtube and go through some tutorials on just how to do so. their are plenty out their. keep up the good work!!

 

[maca73]

thanks for the feedback, I shall try and apply that advice